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Wednesday, 18 October 2017

New School Feelings Poem

For literacy we had to right a poem about the new school that we have just moved into. The poem had to have emotion words, alliteration and a simile. The feeling we had to do were feel, hear, see, touch and smell and an alliteration had to be in one of the sentences.



Te Manu Tukutuku Poem

I feel like a role model when I come in the school just like a All Black.

When I go in the hall I hear echos from all of the kids yelling.

I see all of the different colours in the classrooms.

I touch the light brown tables.

I smell the fresh new equipment and the whiteboard makers when we write on the whiteboard.

The wonderful walls have got crazy colours on them and they look amazing.
I can't wait for what happens this year