Last week in writing we learnt about adjectives. We wrote a summer poem that had lots of wow words in it. First brainstormed some wow words so we can make our poem interesting. Then we wrote our story. When I finished I had to reread my story to make sure it made sense.
Great work Evan. I remember doing that writing work before. Maybe next time you can make sure it makes sense.
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DeleteBrrrrr it is very cold as I am reading this and it brought back great memories of summer. However I do like winter and the frosty mornings when the ice crunches under your feet. Next time think about how you can create more of a picture in the readers head through word choice.
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