I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
kia ora my name is Harley I am a year 5 student from kaikohe west school.I am really impressed with this blog post because it has questions and also tells a story at the same time. next time you could make the photo of the man running instead make a photo of you running to the car.
KIA Ora my name is Jade I am a year 5 student from Kaikohe west school. I really like your HAUNTED GRAVEYARD because you can choose wot to do like call the ghost busters.
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kia ora my name is Harley I am a year 5 student from kaikohe west school.I am really impressed with this blog post because it has questions and also tells a story at the same time. next time you could make the photo of the man running instead make a photo of you running to the car.
ReplyDeleteKIA Ora my name is Jade I am a year 5 student from Kaikohe west school. I really like your HAUNTED GRAVEYARD
ReplyDeletebecause you can choose wot to do like call the ghost busters.